Jordon,
Making conversation at a work related dinner event, I asked what you did when you weren't working and fully expected an answer along the lines of "I spend time with family and friends". I was surprised when you said you were a writer and had also created your book's cover artwork.
My wife and I loved the artwork and being a "wanna be" writer myself, I knew I had to buy your book. You did not disappoint me and like the other reviewers here, I hope a sequel is coming very soon!
"Still waters run deep" sums up my impression after first meeting you and now after enjoying your artwork and writings, I see those waters are far from still but certainly deep. You have a real and expressive talent! Please keep pursuing your passion.
You have an ability to organize, research and pull together a very tightly written story. You immediately got my attention with your detailed descriptions and I was quickly pulled into Agent Tom Larson's world. Fallen Lotus Petals is believable, contemporary and so very well written, I fully expected follow up coverage on the nightly news! Thank you.